Wow, this is great, very well written too..Good poem *5* |
very well written, I loved every line of it, it flowed very nicely, keep up the work babe :) |
by mita
awsome poem--->mama |
by Andrea
amazing poem! |
by Elynnka
gr8 poem...i can relate to what you said *5* |
by hussain
really nice poem...u let ur emotions run thru those words. |
by Rocky
wow really good i like it, i add you so i can read more of your good poems |
by Thea
This is really amasing. brilliant! |
by asdfg
Little different, yet very good... Keep up the good work! |
A VERY WELL WRITTEN DARK POEM |
Brilliant Title, I Don't Usualy Like Dark Poems But I Loved This One 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Robert
Very profound poem I really did love it I gave it a 5 congrads!!! |
by ~*Ley*~
thats so sad. but very well done. 5/5 |
by miss scooby
WOW...this was really sad. gave me shivers. and I appreciate the honesty in the comment you provided to me. Yes there are different types of pain but i wasnt not stipluating them as all one..I was comparing...the pain the less fortunate feel to the "pain" {hense my quotations} a lot of us have such as warm meals, cable, the internet, an education etc etc. the word pain in my poem is not actually the meaning of the word itself...its a sybolic word for many things we take for granted. |