Great poem! I was really impressed by your usage of words that aren't commonly used. It showed tremendous flexibility and extent of well-used vocabulary. Thanks so much for your cooments on my poetry - they were useful as well as appreciated. Thanks again!
-Kate
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michael sounds like a lucky guy to have a friend like you

i really love this poem...
it has a really nice flow to it. ^.^
good work... keep it up! i expect to hear more wonderful words from you...
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