YOU

by big_thick_tool   Mar 21, 2005


Your eyes
sparkling like the stars in the night sky

your smile
a piece of you so beautiful, so powerful
something i just cannot resist

your lips
soft plum and juicy
ready for me to kiss

your face
like a rose put together to perfection
your eyes , your mouth,your nose

your body
a part of you that makes a man jealous
especially with my fellas

...i saw u in my dreams,
but it all came true
the moment i met you

my mind blanked
the past disappeared
it all got cleared
you were all that filled my mind

i close my eyes
and all see is me and you
were out on the coast holing hands
yes this is true

i love more than anything else
but there are no words that can describe how i feel
i don't even know if this can be reel

i am going crazy about you
the one i cherish love and adore
and i don't wont anything else....nothing more

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  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    The second line from the bottom....you might want to change "odor" to "adore" She doesn't stink does she? lol...

    Anyway this was a really sweet poem! I wish my fiance would write something so sweet! Lord knows I'd go crazy. Well she is a very lucky girl....5/5
    Take Care

  • 19 years ago

    by big_thick_tool

    this is my personal favriot of all the ones i have written it is also my first with a few minor changes but hey its like saying goes u just cant be an origanal lol

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