this is my personal favriot of all the ones i have written it is also my first with a few minor changes but hey its like saying goes u just cant be an origanal lol

The second line from the bottom....you might want to change "odor" to "adore" She doesn't stink does she? lol...

Anyway this was a really sweet poem! I wish my fiance would write something so sweet! Lord knows I'd go crazy. Well she is a very lucky girl....5/5
Take Care