by Toni Mar 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She walks alone, down her path of despair |
by Just Sierra
Well, you wrote every inch of pain, emotion, and everything imaginable in that sweet poem! Loved it to bits and pieces!!! Love you lots!! |
by confusion
stunning poem, im speachless! deffinetely is one of your best, truly outstanding! wow. also liked the way it ended on a more positive note, really finished it off well. great! hold your head up :) luv lu -x-x-x- |
by deadnalone
wow i thought it was awesome, again, amazing i really loved this bit |
Awww that's so prettiful. I was so worried at the start, the imagery was so dark and eerie and perfect and I got scared after saying 'fear this is the end of her fight' or something. It's an amazing poem, one of your best I think so stop putting yourself down. |
by Toni
:-) x |