u know one part of this i really liked

She dares to look up…testing her sight
But this time, above her, she sees a new light
Blue eyes in the distance, chasing the dark
Bringing the light, back into her heart

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:) i will chase anything away hun that i can :) i lvoe you and i will never leave your side, this is an amazing poem hun, and i truely love it!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx mmmmwah!!!!

:-) x

Awww that's so prettiful. I was so worried at the start, the imagery was so dark and eerie and perfect and I got scared after saying 'fear this is the end of her fight' or something. It's an amazing poem, one of your best I think so stop putting yourself down.
Missed you alot lately munchkin, hope everything's okay. I'm still and forever will be, here for you.
Take good care fo yourself for me bumweed.
All my love and more.
Laura.

wow i thought it was awesome, again, amazing i really loved this bit
"Mist surrounds her weathered face
Swirling her soul, yet leaving no trace
She tries to stand up, but her body is weak
She tries to call out, but finds she can’t speak"
I loved the contrast in it, and it just seemed completely perfect, wish i cud write like this, u r such an inspiration to me,
love u always,
ellie
xoxoxoxox

stunning poem, im speachless! deffinetely is one of your best, truly outstanding! wow. also liked the way it ended on a more positive note, really finished it off well. great! hold your head up :) luv lu -x-x-x-

Well, you wrote every inch of pain, emotion, and everything imaginable in that sweet poem! Loved it to bits and pieces!!! Love you lots!!

~Sierra