Interpretation

by kristen   Mar 21, 2005


She sits on the corner of her worn out mattress
torn at the seams, revealing whats inside.

so bent out of shape, worn down to nothing
just plain and dull with many stories to tell.

never seeing sunlight, always hidden in the corner, covered with old sheets and undeserving bodies.

stained with memories of good and bad times, patched up with love, only to be torn open again.

supporting two children,
through consciousness and dreams that turn to nightmares, comforting with warmth.

seeming so old, until looked at closer
really so young, but no one could ever see.

the folds and the the tears and the softness inside
no one will ever notice just what its like
to be looked at and judged by whats on the outside.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem contains so vivid imagery, and the choice of words in it is great. This is my favorite one of yours, so deep and touching. I like it from the beginning to the end, every stanza is excellently written.
    5/5 but you deserve more for this piece.
    Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Faith

    FANTISTIC. I loved it. I have NEVER, EVER read anything like that before. When you get a chance, will you please read and comment on mine please.

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    yes its unique poem..and keeps u glued and interested throughout...very flowing...and well written...keep writing!!! u got talent there!!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very unique I liked it! You tell a story in ur own unique way thats what I like so much about this poem! Check out mine if u would Thanx! I think u should write more poems like this exellent work! Take Care!

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