Hey, this is amazing!! I luv it!!! You are definetely in the right direction!! Keep on posting your stuff!! Wow...and the ending is great..wasnt expecting that...great poem..keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

~*~wow, i like this poem, i feel the same way as you do...i luv the imagery in it, it makes me feel like i can like hear the thunder and lightning and i can liek i dunno it was really good! keep up the good writing hunni, o btw, spankumz for ur comment on my poem, i really appreciated it, i think my poems all suck ass but it is nice to know what other people think of them ttyl buh bye,
jenna~*~