Hey, this is really good...keep ur head up..thingz will get better...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

another great poem....keep up the good work

I like this 1 better then the other 2

Great poem.. very good.. keep it up.. I voted a 5! Please check out my poems and comment and vote.. thanks

wow great poem... you seem like a very deep person from this poem!! awesome write... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

i like this...keep smiling ok things will get better!!!! love ur poetry keep it up xxxxxx

This is very good. Keep writing

The whole idea of the poem is just totally awesome, I really loved it! I love the words you use and just the style of the poem. Wonderful. What can I say? You definitly deserve 5/5 and no less, keep on writing.
SatuzKa
p.s If you have the time, please check out my poem Lady Isadora the Fair. thank you so much. btw, i'm gonna check out some of your other poems too!

very good poem.. I voted a 5! keep up the good job!! Please check out my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" and please vote and comment it would mean soooo much to me.. thanks

Your poem again... is amazing. so much so

You just now inspired me to write this:

Shattered Adversary

The adversary coats you
in an ever thickening shell.
Adding layer over layer
just to keep you in his spell.

The spell of his temptations
Every whisper that he makes.
Wants to smother you in sadness
for he wants to see you break.

He continues with the pressure
wants to fold you in a shroud.
Knowing well that he must bury
every Noble that is found.

For to him you are a focus,
He's aware that you are strong.
Even Angels sing about you
in a very special song.

They sing about the triumphs,
you accomplish when your free.
About the power of your presence,
and your capabilities.

They sing about the hour
when you come to see this truth.
that your meant for something epic
and that Satan's after you.

But most of all... they sing about,
how you escape from satans cage.
In a shattering of layers,
with the brightness of your rage.

For they know that satan's weaker
and can't keep you in his hold.
As they watch with smiles from heaven,
as your wondrous wings unfold.