Amazing write, I loved this
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5/5

Hey, this is amazing!! Itz perfect...i wouldnt change a thing...and this is true...it happens out there...and you captured the feeling awesomely! lol...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

hey...this is really sad..wow, i hopethis isn't true...very deep..i felt it..it just got to me, i cried...keep it up~
*Brittany*

this is so sad, but yet so good. i really liked it. hope ur alright. hold on and hopefully eveything will turn out alright someday. Please take time to vote/comment on my poems. It will mean a lot for me.
THANKS
AWESOME POEM!!

Luv,
Noziyna

really good poem like REALLY GOOD just one thing kind of bothers me april 7th 2005 hasnt happened yet i hope ur not going 2 try 2 commit suicide i tried once it really wont help some1 stopped me b4 i cud i hope some1 stops u

great poem, very beautiful, deep. i can relate

Wow, this is truly great. It was beautiful... great job!
Car

hey, AMAZING poem... theres actually a moral behind it... i loved it! Keep up the good work... and always keep your head up... I'm always here to talk! XOXO Tina (please take some time to read my poems and comment,,, i would really appreciate it)

hey your poem was fantastic. although im not as down as the girl in the story i can relate to some things she feels. it really was great well done you have a talent there!

WOW....I dont know what to say, that was sad, But you have a really good talent...keep up the good work!
I Love it

this is so very sad..and so well written..nice work..take care
love tegan

I loved it! *Jordan Paige*

very nice, i have my own little book too.

i loved your poem it's very good and it's the truth because things do happen like that out there in our world.

that is really really good, and so true, your an awesome writer, i loved it!

Its really sad but I love it nonetheless keep it up

OMG i so understand every bit of this poem, u're really talented, it reminds me of a poem called little miss perfect and its so true GR8 poem **

really, really amazing!!!
it was so well put together and at the end it kinda showed what a bully can do to sm1 and the pain they go through.

exelent-5/5!!!

wow this poem is so amazing. . . sad yet so true. . . everyone can relate just a little to this. . . knowing about the pain and the hurt that is has to be dealt with. . . sadly without the help of others. . . great way to express this and a beautifully creative story. . . keep it up. . .

Love, Taylor

wow.... thats really powerful, that seems so much like today