Wow, I'm just speechless! That was a really amazing terrific poem! You have a lot of talent here! (",)

~Krissy

I loved it... so touching and so much truth... great job!

omg hunni thats really good. i loved it. i can relate to this so much. i hope that this poem is not true,but sadly things like this do happen every day and their is no way to get around it. your a very talented poet! so keep on writing!

There is no way I can take the pain away from you but I know who can. It might not mean anything right now but someone is watching over you and he just wants you to hold his hand cause he's reaching for you but you're so burried in your pain to see it. Please open your eyes and see that he just wants to help.
Great Poem..
Keep the faith
Peace Out

Thats horrible =(

Sent shivers down my spine, some people can cause so much pain, and others are afraid to tell aybody. Beautiful
xxxx

wow amazin poem , realli gd! it was sooo sad :( but the words init mint! bet it took ya ages but its realli truely amazin! kay x x

itz so sad but i luved it 5/5

great poem it's very sad. people don't know how much their words can hurt another. 5/5 great job

this is really awsome!

This is a fabulous poem. If it's relating to someone you knew, i'm soo sorry. But, i think it explains so much of what your life. or what you think of someones life has been like!

SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xX MAZ Xx

The emotions this brings out makes it a truly beautiful poem

hey that was a really good poem sometime i feel the same way i feel like i don't belong just like the girl in the poem so i can really relate to it i luved it u should keep writing
~cassandra~

god thats saad, very emotional poem, but a masterpiece

awesome i love it

hi!....you don't know me....my name is Erin....but your poem has touched my heart....maybe because i do the same things....i write i a little book and then i hurt myself.....i noticed that your poem says that the girls last story was written on April 7 2005, that hasn't happend yet....don't try and kill your self....pleaze....i know from some random stranger your probly like come on you don't know what is going on in my life you don't know how bad it is.....but pleaze two ppl in my life have tried to commit suicide....i stopped them both....one was my mom and one was my best friend....read my poem Suicide....pleaze and reconsider....please! if you ever need to talk i'm here
love ~Erin

Wow Im at a loss of words. i seriously cried. I hope that the story isn't true. and I hate to admit it but its happing out there somewhere everday. Keep up the good work.
LOTS OF LUV
SHAWNDA

love the poem, so much. it's written beautifully... i have a little book.. love the poem!
-K

That's so sad. :(( That's true the ppl that tease and bully dont really know what the other person is going through.