amazingly thought through i'm 'not sure how long this took you to write whether you were thinking of things to write down and it took you a long time or if it just came out that good NEways its a great poem 5/5

I really enjoyed that and it was sad, but i have to ask why the date was in teh future?

That was amazing, keep it up!

holy cow i love it i wish i had that much talent i reallt really liked it take a look at some of mine if ya would later

wow!!! this is poem seems really deep meaningful..luvs it
_*shae*_

Excellent poem. Sad but beautifully written. Truly something that happens in life so much. hugs, lol, *Ann*

thats really good. i know something of how she was feeling. x

Rock On!

This is such a wonderful poem. also its touchin in a way. Good job...5/5

i luved it i wish i could write poems as good as urs

This is very sad and moving..I always like to read touching poems.

Lisa D. Larson

One of the best poems I have ever read.Deep in love with the composition.Gave you 5.Check mines as well whenever possible.Jeff

OMG!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!! THAT WAS WONDERFUL!! GREAT JOB!!
Katie

hey i just love your poem... it is soo sad!!!

aww wow...that is so sad...amazing write though...very touching <33 xxx you're a very talented writer xxx

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OMG this is so sad, It is so good! im crying lol :( awsome job hope u r ok, i here if u need me k. luv always Sixpence None The Richer..

Wow! That was simply amazing. It was a truly a heart breaking poem. Great Job!

Wow this was amazing... is this about you?? I really like this and I can relate. 5 for you

i think the suicide poems are all overdone...this wasn't very well written, though it was very expressive. Good job, but next time, perhaps write something with quality as opposed to writing something in others' quantity?

i liked this a lot...keep it up..you really got the emotions across