by Kaityln
Omg i was touched by that poem.................... |
by MaGs
Omg i luv it!! this poem is awsome!! keep writing!!! 5/5 |
by VYXSIN
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Hey really wonderful poem, the message youve got at the end is so true,great poem |
by misty
Wow honey! I remember when I walked in your shoes...if this is about you anyway. I hope things are changing for the better now and that you have realized that even when you think noone is there for you you open your eyes! YOU are your own best friend! I know it sounds silly but believe untill you open yourself up and love yourself and accept yourself it will be so hard to let anyone else . Think about it. love ya! |
by Tessa
This poem was speechless i loveds it , it was really touching and i think that it woud make alot of people feel for th girl in the poem |
by Andi
This is great!!! it has a really good message and it's an excellent story! u r a terrific writer and should most definately keep up the good work. if u could comment on my poems i'd appreciate it |
by Anick
Wonderful! |
by Jenni
Wow. this poem gave me the chills after i read it. you did a wonderful job at capturing the feelings that this girl felt and it really hits me. |
by Polly
A beautiful, yet so sad story. I love the flow of it, the rhyme is so perfect and makes it flow so well. Take care and keep writing |
I LOVE IT! |
by fakesmile
It was very moving... awesome poem! |
by Breeeezie
Wow this is really strong poem |
by xo kisses xo
Awe! *tear* thats so sad!!! great poem though!!! 5/5 |
by Wallace
A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that. |
by isabel
Absolutely amazing and so deep and sad... |
by Me
That was soooooo god damn good. Your so talented seriously good work. |
by lydia
Wow this wuz truely amazing i luv it cuz im the one at my skool always getting teased ..its depressing but o well ='[ |
by TyrantxTia
Oh wow. this is sad. but its realy good |
OMG i REALLY REALLY love this poem!! if you knew my life you would know why... but yeah anyways you did every awesome on this one!! |