Lonely***

by NoPatience   Mar 22, 2005


Lonely cries
flood my eyes
with tears of my
lonely goodbye

lonely tears
give me fears
with a sound that is
oh so clear

lonely nights
make me fright
and let me know
this isn't right

lonely thoughts
the lies i bought
give me strength
this battle i fought

lonely dreams
make me scream
it's never right
all though it may seem

lonely days
play by plays
i wish that they
would take me away

lonely bribes
kill me inside
laugh at me
while I'm dieing inside

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    i will and thanks alot!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    I love this poem! Its great.

    I can really relate to it!

    Just keep on writing!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    well thanks and i really appreciate the comment!

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    i will and thanks alot every one!

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    I liked your rhyme scheme... (aaba) I'll have to try that sometime. Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.