by katie!
Another good one, I especially liked this line "Does a laughter mean an injection of humor in someones life?" very good :D |
by Dorotea©
:) Hey, another good one again. I though over all this one was very good, but maybe work on the flow a bit more. In some parts the lines are so much longer than in the other parts, so the flow doesnt stay the same. Over all, very good poem, keep on writing. |
by hussain
wow very thought provoking poem ...am sure people have answers to some of those q's and am sure u do too... |
by Lil Luce
wow really good poem! i really like the questions...i enjoy poems that make ya think cos they always have a lasting impression dont ya think? hope to read more of ur work soon! |