I like this poem! It's really good! Your ideas are very awesome. If you could somehow manage to put them in a rhyming pattern, now that would just be fantastic! But good poem! : ) Thanks for your comment btw!

Thats a kwl poem chek out my new 1 sumtym its calld your suicide (i think cnt rememba lol) id realli apreciate it thx babe u got a gd talent bi da way
tasha xxx

Hey its a nice poem...but i dont really agree with your point of view.

we CAN love someone we havent even met...infact...even you do...if u arent an atheist. dont you love god? doesnt god love you back??

so why cant it be another person? dont doubt his love...it would shatter him...it really hurts....and if i were u i wouldnt do that.

just my point uv view tho, good luck.