Damned Soul

by Iyla   Mar 22, 2005


I feel your presence in my room
i feel the cold among my skin
i can feel your blood thirst eyes dart side to side
i can feel all your evil blowing in the wind

You move close and even closer
i wish to believe you are not there
i feel you leaning over my neck
and slowly moving away my hair

I feel your cold hands grab my neck
i feel the smile spreading on your face, your thinking of how much to take, and how wonderful my blood will taste

i feel your breath upon my neck
as you slowly dig your fangs into my skin, Vampire just do it, kill me
for i no longer want to exists

you plunge your teeth deeper and deeper into my skin, and start
feasting, I'm in so much pain as you take most of my blood now I'm far to weak, you lick your lips and slowly move away

The cold over comes me as I'm swept into the deadly darkness far below; i can no longer come out in the day, never again for I'm a lonely damned soul

* special thanx to dance in the ashes....THANX!!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    =o I am at your mercy
    Gosh your poems are so good
    I wish i could write like you =)
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by husbandlover

    Dude i love vampires!!!!!! awesome poem.5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    I LOVE IT hun....well done always n forevr

    luv ya angel..

  • 19 years ago

    by XxCrimsonxSinxX

    This one is awesome, i love it
    keep it up...

  • 19 years ago

    by Iyla

    :) thanx, i will. thanx for commenting