beautiful!!! very deep and strong. ur very talented. im def gonna have to check our more of your work.
Ariane
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Very good poem with such deep emotion. Very well written. Check out some of mine if u would please Thanx and Take Care!

Great job!! thats very very good! 5/5 definately! I loved it! You did a great job! I love all your poems! your on my fav!

omg, i love it, ive seen that happen a lot , n i even know wat if feels like... good job!

I thought this was very well written. Although I think as i was reading it i was envisioning it as a song. nice job as a poem, i think it'd be amazing as a song.