by Arie Mar 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
No one understands me |
by SuperJenius
It was good but it colud of been better with some changes |
by Lil Luce
it doesnt suck! altho i think the punctuation could do with a slight alterationa nd perhaps make it all ryhme or not rhyme at all rather than little bitds! good for a first submit! take care and thanks for ur comment |
by Lil Luce
hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv! |
by Lil Luce
hey! it doesnt suck you can really feel the emotion involved! keep trying and you will succeed! dont pull yourslef down girl! id appreciate your comments on some of my work if you have the time. keep it luv! |