Heatha - great poem, awesome imagery, astounding verses flowing beautifully and freely. Your vision is limitless, and I especially loved the lines "the shattered remains of my heart that you left behind
pieces you left for someone else to find" I found that hard to misinterpret and easy to grasp as a feeling I think many can relate to, definitely females, cuz you know you're all together in this fight for your survival and acceptance, I prey he hurts you no more, and you and keith make new memories that replace any sad ones you might still have. dont forget your past, learn from it and move on. Great poem girl, as you well know.