by Donna Mar 22, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
He was in the distance |
by Jamie
Yeah f the system right...it can be crappy sometimes but great job writing about it thats a s.h.i.t.y situation, greast flow great rhyming kinda good job 5/.5 |
by Donna
THANKS BUT COMPARED TO SOME OF YOURS ....YOU CAN FINISH THE REST WITH YOUR IMAGINATION!!!!!!!! |
by Donna
Thanks, isnt it funny how society puts theunimportant things first. like in the poem they all wanted to wacth what was going on in the trial instead of helpin the woman get her child back crazy isnt it! |
I think people are often mislead when they think they are going to get a fair trial. Your poem was titled fixingly and the poem and content itself was pretty good. :) |
by David Paul
I like'd it cause it reminded me of one of my uncles and what happened to his god child. It was a hard time for us all. Good job on the poem. |