Unforgiven pleasure

by Erika   Mar 23, 2005


Unforgiven pleasure of a tear down my cheek
Waiting for the morrow to take me from my skin.
Sadness overcomes the sanity of my so called world.
Shaken I am by the misery of my lonely soul.

Open your eyes to a new and old black day.
Look around you, not one person in your deserted way.
Play upon the evil clouds of solitude and pain.
Let the rain clear your soul and take you away.

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  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    touching and inspiring in a way.... very sad though...keep writing, -5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*
    "this too shall pass"

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i really like this poem.... i thought it was great!! nicely written keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    This poem reminds me of something- I am not sure what. But it does...
    Another beautifully written poem, though very short. You could ad onto it, or make a part two for it, maybe in a more story way instead of raw emotions.
    But definetely toys with ones feelings.
    Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow such a great poem very well written. U have such a talent to write keep it up! Check out some of mine if u would please Thanx and Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    hey, that is reali touchin, n i like the way its all pieced to gether!!!

    5 owta 5

    xoxobambam

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