by «_Ä€Ãdï©+ïØñ¯» Mar 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
You said you had a girlfriend, |
by Alissa
that was realllly good....god job |
by Lisa Mook
i love this poem but i have one tiny suggestion instead of havin under the ... have beneath it makes it sound better u dont have to its just a suggestion and yea ive heard some of the ones i have before but i have made slight changes to them makin them better in my eyes and i just like them so thatnx |
dat was gr8 luvd the rhymin 5/5 fanx 4 commentin on mine x x x |
by lorrie
that was good and hopefully u got the man u wanted keep it up 5/5 check sum of mine out |
by Lisa Mook
I LOVE YOUR STUFF THE POEM IS AWESOME CHECK OUT SOME OF MINE LISA MOOK |