My Angel

by Just Lucy   Mar 23, 2005


Angels live in heaven
all of them but one
this angel lives on earth, with two feet on the ground

this angel doesn't know it
but he is admired from afar
i know i cannot tell him
so i hope my feelings leave

i love him heaps
i love him more
but this angel will soon fly

as i stand upon his porch
i hear the screams of pain
and than the screams of horror
and than i heard the crying of the poor boys mother

he couldn't handle all the slack
he never wanted to be here
he was doing good in school
and was always out of trouble

he hated being teased and bullied
he said that he had no-one
and in his suicidal note
this is what he wrote

mum and dad, i must be off
the heavens above are calling my name
i couldn't live my life like this
i couldn't handle all the voices
i couldn't understand
why people are so harsh to me
I'm sorry for this hurting i caused
but my whole life was just pain
please mum and dad,
this is my good bye
thank you guys for always being there

this angel had left, he'd gone up where he belonged
but now i really fear, i won't see this angel again

(C) Lucy Green

*this poem means so much to me, please comment on it, please!*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    So sad Lucy dear, I felt the pain soak into my heart like it was my own. You always write so wonderfully and pull the person into the world you create. I hope that this wasn't based on an actual event you had to live with, it's a painful thing when someone you love chooses to leave. *hugs* Loved it as always :)
    ~Rhea~

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    I hope you get some release from your poetry...they are so sad im glad you are able to express your pain, it must be hard carrying all these emotions. this one is really good, but very sad...keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I adore this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a real good job.Take care of you and keep up the good work!Best regards,Michelle XxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    :'( omg this is so sad...actually made me cry... oh wow... it's just simply stunning...kudos :)

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is a very heart felt poem. i have added you to my favourites. i love your work.

    i will read more of your poems soon! keep writing!

    5/5 David