by katie!
Very emotional poem, good work, thought provoking as well, keep it up |
i luved this poem. you have a lot of talent too. this poem was really touching. |
Wow! really great poem. Thanks for the comment on my site and thanks for keeping my secret..... |
i can see why it means a lot to you, is it a true story? well done its a good poem. comment 4 of 5!!! one to go!! |
by Britney
Wow.. that so sad.. i would be really upset if my angel had gained his wings. Loved the poem... still reading hehe. |
*Is* this a true story? |
by Goran Rahim
Another 5/5 poem, u r so great... |
by Kenz
Wonderful. deep. personal. 5/5 |
by David
This is a very heart felt poem. i have added you to my favourites. i love your work. |
by Daz Mellow
:'( omg this is so sad...actually made me cry... oh wow... it's just simply stunning...kudos :) |
by Mihaela
I adore this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a real good job.Take care of you and keep up the good work!Best regards,Michelle XxX |
I hope you get some release from your poetry...they are so sad im glad you are able to express your pain, it must be hard carrying all these emotions. this one is really good, but very sad...keep it up |
So sad Lucy dear, I felt the pain soak into my heart like it was my own. You always write so wonderfully and pull the person into the world you create. I hope that this wasn't based on an actual event you had to live with, it's a painful thing when someone you love chooses to leave. *hugs* Loved it as always :) |