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by Tina Mar 23, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about death
I listen to the sounds around me god im so afraid can i be forgiven for the choices i have made? My breaths are getting shorter my world is turning black these are my final moments and there is no turning back should i hold on a little longer or should i just let go? what was i thinking when i did this i dont even know someone please help me i dont really want to die someone please save me i think i hear people walking by I yell for them to help me they break down the wooden door here comes the ambulance thank god ill bleed no more thank you god for saving me i hope you understand my life revolves around you you hold me in your hand
by **Stacy**
Wow this is a really kool poem chic, 5/5 thanx 4 d comment i really appreciate it. take care, bye.
by Freakie_D
it was okay, the last two stanzas and the last line of the 3rd one have to go...it throws it off atleast for me it does.
