Comments : Bed Ridden

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    I liked this poem a lot... I cannot think of any constuctive criticism... as I think it flowed well and worked well as a poem.... good work ur on my favs

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow excellent poem! keep it up alough what is sin 7 (im not very religious, is it one of the commandments?)
    check out some of my work if ya could. thanks
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    ..i enjoyed reading it ...have to agree u have got talent there...keep up the good work!

    take care