by katie!
I liked this poem a lot... I cannot think of any constuctive criticism... as I think it flowed well and worked well as a poem.... good work ur on my favs |
by Lil Luce
wow excellent poem! keep it up alough what is sin 7 (im not very religious, is it one of the commandments?) |
by hussain
..i enjoyed reading it ...have to agree u have got talent there...keep up the good work! |