When it Rains

by The Flame Within   Mar 23, 2005


Something is wrong
my breath is cut off
i am struggling for air
and it is getting tough

no where to go no place to hid
i can't leave
it's like drowning under water
i can't breath

the clouds no long scatter
they become one
light becomes dark
i can no longer see the sun

but suddenly
the light finds a hole
the sun shows its light
that the dark stole

i stare at its beauty
not caring that it burns my eye
but then the cloud closes up
and once again it's a black sky

the rain begins to fall
and my lungs begin to choke
the pointing fingers, the stares
being called a joke

but who cars about that
I'm no holding a grudge
i don't care what they say
let them judge

but it hurts me on the inside
when i think my friends are gone
but that would be a lie because you here
telling me i am wrong

i wish everyone in the world
had a friend like you
because on their rainy day
they would now what to do

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    lol, mah bad. Well, what can you expect? lol, I hate making an idiot out of myself because I assume things. You're welcome for the comments though-I LOVE ADDING THEM!! lol. Sorry, really hyper...this girl on the forum got Cranberry Squash stuck in my head.....lol.

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    that was for you crazy lol
    and thanx for the comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Such a cute tribute to whoever it is about. Glad you have a friend here for you when you need one, on your "rainy days" lol. I hope you're okay!!