Blue

by BloodScars   Mar 23, 2005


Running down her arm is blood
she crying for hours
holding in her had a knife
all she wants to do i end her life

she doesn't know what happened
why shes so depressed
she doesn't want there tears
but it takes away her fears

her mom doesn't understand why
neither does her best friends
they all cry
wishing she wont die

her only love
left her forever
her heart now broke
she wants to get better but how

all the little pieces
fits together so right
everything builds up
she wanting it to be night

her best friend not knowing
not knowing the true
Reason why every things like this
why shes always blue

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  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Great poem! You are a really good writer. Keep up the good work!
    Love ya alwayz....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXO

  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    hey spiff can it be in europe? ya know european guys r suposed to be hott!
    lol

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    well. we all want to die but there is something that is our torinquent our something that chains us to this earth to keep us from leaving cuz we love those things so much. im happy im one of those things for you. same here, :) don't worry i won't go just yet. lets just wait till we're good and old and sitting next to each other in an old ppl's home on a horrible floral print couch. then we can talk about our grand children and thier problems. kk? sounds like a good plan to me.
    oo yeah this is a good poem *5*
    spiffy tiffy luvs ya

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    excellent poem, very good in rhyme.

    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

    Love, Amit ~

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