by Just Sierra Mar 23, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
My heart keeps burning |
by Hades
Very good, excellent flow and meaningful story |
by Forever29
Excellent! The flow seemed flawless. I gave it a 5! I have a "Dark Angel" poem as well. Read it if you find time. Take care & keep on writing poetry! |
by Maddie
That was really really well written, it all flowed together nicely. It was also very moving, i felt like i could feel the pain myself through your words. good work! |
by **Just Her**
wow that was sad.... this stanza is the one i liked most |
by eternal rest
wow, if that isnt moving i dont know what is.... i think were going through pretty much the same thing... or at least we feel the same... |