Comments : Dark Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW!!! Really good job hun! I really like it! ~5/5~
    Love alwayz....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXO

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...amazing poem! lol, i write alot in math, i get so bored... =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    hahaha-same!!!! Its sooooo B.O.R.I.N.G. I'm just naturally good at it I guess, because I never do any homework, (it doesn't count for a grade, but helps prepare ourselves for the test), I never listen in class, I doze off, and still I manage to do good. :-D. its sort of funny really....

    The teacher hates my guts.

    :-p.

    Thanks Andrea.

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Aw so very sad. But so extremely brilliant as always! I get bored in math too lol.
    Always here for ya,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by |-Turkeylove-|

    Math is horrible! I can see why you write in that class. You are a very good writer, keep writing them. I love to read them. And, i'd keep writing in Math!
    Krista J.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Sad and brilliant and just simply genius, as usual. You continue to amaze... lol, I'd keep writing in math, too!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    hey this is a nice poem. great job. keep up the good work. and if you want to remake the promise then i would be happy to. i havent doubted you once. it is up to you to make the promise if you want. i will gladly help you in any cause possible. you know if you ever need to talk that you can tell me. keep up the great work you are doing. Much LUv

    Nick

    p.s try to get on aim more often if you would like to talk about the problems more.

  • 19 years ago

    by Isabel

    That's good :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Wow very good poem, hehe you call maths math, how curious, keep it up xx

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    wow, if that isnt moving i dont know what is.... i think were going through pretty much the same thing... or at least we feel the same...

    b-e-a-utiful! keep it up

    *kel

  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    wow that was sad.... this stanza is the one i liked most
    "My veins throb so often
    And I'm frustrated from all the pain
    But how come they hurt so much?
    I've stopped cutting my vein..."
    it was powerful. great poem hun
    stay strong always

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    That was really really well written, it all flowed together nicely. It was also very moving, i felt like i could feel the pain myself through your words. good work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent! The flow seemed flawless. I gave it a 5! I have a "Dark Angel" poem as well. Read it if you find time. Take care & keep on writing poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hades

    Very good, excellent flow and meaningful story