WOW!!! Really good job hun! I really like it! ~5/5~ |
by Andrea
wow...amazing poem! lol, i write alot in math, i get so bored... =) |
by Just Sierra
hahaha-same!!!! Its sooooo B.O.R.I.N.G. I'm just naturally good at it I guess, because I never do any homework, (it doesn't count for a grade, but helps prepare ourselves for the test), I never listen in class, I doze off, and still I manage to do good. :-D. its sort of funny really.... |
by EpithetPoet
Aw so very sad. But so extremely brilliant as always! I get bored in math too lol. |
Math is horrible! I can see why you write in that class. You are a very good writer, keep writing them. I love to read them. And, i'd keep writing in Math! |
by Carlee Ann
Sad and brilliant and just simply genius, as usual. You continue to amaze... lol, I'd keep writing in math, too! |
hey this is a nice poem. great job. keep up the good work. and if you want to remake the promise then i would be happy to. i havent doubted you once. it is up to you to make the promise if you want. i will gladly help you in any cause possible. you know if you ever need to talk that you can tell me. keep up the great work you are doing. Much LUv |
by Isabel
That's good :-) |
by ?
Wow very good poem, hehe you call maths math, how curious, keep it up xx |
by eternal rest
wow, if that isnt moving i dont know what is.... i think were going through pretty much the same thing... or at least we feel the same... |
by **Just Her**
wow that was sad.... this stanza is the one i liked most |
by Maddie
That was really really well written, it all flowed together nicely. It was also very moving, i felt like i could feel the pain myself through your words. good work! |
by Forever29
Excellent! The flow seemed flawless. I gave it a 5! I have a "Dark Angel" poem as well. Read it if you find time. Take care & keep on writing poetry! |
by Hades
Very good, excellent flow and meaningful story |