WOW hun, please keep writing, powerful stuff here! Take care

xX MAZ Xx

i really like this hun.......i can relate too, keep it up =)......laterzz

-brittnay-

everybody has ddark secrets.

I like this one alot, well written, I know the feeling, keep it up xxx

This is great Carmen ..sad but great,
deep feelings and emotion,,, be happy in the fact that you have talent.. you are young and there is a lot more to come from you

for the above reasons i voted 5/5 for this one

stay safe
Doreen

i FELT AS IF YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT ME, AWESOME!

Carmen..this is a poetry Comment website..so I will tell you the truth....

It was nice, well written, to the point. Had you added a more consistent syllabal usage..it might have been better. Good job though...

Hina

this was good maybe to short but good

very sad but a wonderful piece of work. I really enjoyed reading it! :)

such sad raw emotion! wonderful work! this is an awsome poem! >>5/5<<
keep it up
bec

I liked this once again an overused topc but i think you somewhat made it your own it rhymed pretty well and it flowed pretty well great poem 5./5