hey. 1st off, thnx 4 commenting on my poem. 2nd, I really liked yours too. U r a talented poet and I hope u'l keep up the good work!

Good poem, I liked the imagery, keep it up xxx

I like'd it so much. I wish some guy would write me one. J/k. well it was good. I needed some insperation.

I love this poem, i love the comparisons you make, its just beautiful!....5

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

In Love Amit

Thanks for the comment, lol when I get angry I get wordy! Anyways, awesome comparisons in this poem, I really liked it.

Hey this is really sweet, I can understand how u feel. Yeah, bout that one guy, he used to like me but he doesn't like me now .... tear tear! Well yeah this is great, I will read more of ur stuff to, u seem to put alot of heart into what u write. Great job!!!
~Amy~

very good. nice poem. 5/5

thanks for commenting/voting on my poems. means a lot to me.
luv
nida

love this poem!! keep it up!! nice flow!! :)

great write, flowed really well. and i know what ya mean when a girl takes all your fun away.. lol -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

i like your poem alot but i think that your stanzas or w/e they are called should be even most of them are three lines so i think they should all be three it makes it cool haha ... well good poem take a 5/5

Yes very well written! Again very well expressed. I thought it was good. :)

wow this is brilliant so creative and heartfelt! loved every line! >>5/5<<
bec

The start was real nice and it flowed well, I think if you stayed with the style you started it would hold more of a power in your words. The sad thing was you changes about a third of the way down and you just chucked it in thew toilet. The first part was real good but the last was very weak I would revise the second parrt just for priciples sake. Well thats all I can say...

I liked it. The rhymes are good. But Im getting sick of rhyming poems. Even though they are good. MEh, it's just me though. but i liked it..

5/5

This is a good poem because fo the feeling that you seem to have put into it and the descriptive words you used i just got like this pretty flower field with lots of sunshine in my head with clouds in the way being like your mom or another girl or something i dunno but great job