I want to die

by Karl Brondehoff   Mar 24, 2005


Take this pain from me,
I carried it so far.
Many years stretch out into eternity.
My judgement was made,
you're all just pawns,
of a cruel "god" who beats me with a spade.
I've been beat, flogged, my mind laid bare. Please I beg you with my tortured soul.
Please.
I want to die.
It will never get better,
so screw: buck up! cheer up.
I'm begging with my beaten heart.
please, please.
I want to die.......

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  • 19 years ago

    by ScarredSoul

    im sorry you feel that way.. but on the lighter side good poem...lol. sry im a lil hyper

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Cheer up (wait thats not the best thing to say)..........um just hang in there so you can write some more great poems for us!
    xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Swallowed by Death

    I thought I told you not to read this brit.........oh well. I was just getting rid of some extra emotions....

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Hang in there!!! Please don't die :*{

    So sad though!!! 5/5

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