by **Just Her** Mar 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
*I have never written a poem like this. It would mean A LOT if everyone would comment and vote. Thank You So Much!* |
by SHYSTY23KO
Its such a cute poem! I really like it, you usued good words and it painted a picture in my head. Its so cute! You did a great job definatly for this being your first time with this style, you should try some more! |
by Vegetable
You can feel your emotion coming from the poem. It is very unike. I have never seen a poem quite like this one. Good job 5/5 |
by AJ
hey, pretty good. keep it up. 5/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
class poem!!! i reallly enjoyed reading it!!! great poem!!! x) |
by shannon
hey.....it was a really good poem...you have a talent ......it kind of confused me but i just get confused a lot lol...5/5! |