Second Time

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 24, 2005


The first time didn’t last
And I still don’t know why
But if we try again
I won’t say goodbye

Because I love you again
I’m falling once more
My heart beats for you
So much, it’s sore

I’m ready for a second try
I’m ready for another chance
To love you with all my heart
And show you that I crave your glance

One look from you is heaven
And worth an hour-long stare
I’d give you my life to tell you
That I still really do care

Give me another chance
To show you I’m right
And that I love you forever,
From day until night

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    So.....is this over a new girl?? Or what?? i mean...you wrote this..surely you have to remember WHO you wrote this for...
    Explain to me, PLEASE...who is this over? Is it still over Jenny? orrrr..who? Emma?

    haha. Your preference in girls always changes.
    You declared your undying love for Jenny earlier and now...?

  • 19 years ago

    by Abigail Rayne

    Great poem, it shows that not only do you know what you're writing about and beleive in it, but experiencing it as well. Even if you're not you had me convinced... keep it up your doing great.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    AHH amazing poem zac! i loved it! 5/5

    ~Rachel, cort's scary vampire obsessed friend

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    ok, I know that you are debating this, and that this is probably a little harsh, but I really don't think you should do this, Zac. I don't. You... oy, I don't know. I just don't want to have to deal with anymore broken hearts. Just... consider this deep before you act, ok? It was a great poem, though! :)
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Omg!! Zac, that was AMAZING!!!!!! I loved it to bits and pieces, every line, every single word!! I've run out of things to say about your poetry. Everytime you leave me in awe and its becoming more and more difficult!! But I still love doing it :-D!!!!!!! Take Care hun, this poem was soooooooo cute!!!

    ~Sierra

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