excellent poem. very well written. nice one, keep writing. by the way, ur id says 21st day. is it ur b'day or what? anyways, read and rate mine sometimes

5/5. take care, always believe in love.

love, amit ~

um, read my profile, it explains what my name means...

Omg!! Zac, that was AMAZING!!!!!! I loved it to bits and pieces, every line, every single word!! I've run out of things to say about your poetry. Everytime you leave me in awe and its becoming more and more difficult!! But I still love doing it :-D!!!!!!! Take Care hun, this poem was soooooooo cute!!!

~Sierra

ok, I know that you are debating this, and that this is probably a little harsh, but I really don't think you should do this, Zac. I don't. You... oy, I don't know. I just don't want to have to deal with anymore broken hearts. Just... consider this deep before you act, ok? It was a great poem, though! :)
Car

AHH amazing poem zac! i loved it! 5/5

~Rachel, cort's scary vampire obsessed friend

Great poem, it shows that not only do you know what you're writing about and beleive in it, but experiencing it as well. Even if you're not you had me convinced... keep it up your doing great.

So.....is this over a new girl?? Or what?? i mean...you wrote this..surely you have to remember WHO you wrote this for...
Explain to me, PLEASE...who is this over? Is it still over Jenny? orrrr..who? Emma?

haha. Your preference in girls always changes.
You declared your undying love for Jenny earlier and now...?