Broke My Heart

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 24, 2005


Why did you tell me that?
Couldn’t leave it be
You had to say it
You had to break my heart

I didn’t think you’d do this
But you’ve killed me
You took my heart and crushed it
And chose the biggest shard
And set the rest aflame

I watched in horror as you did it
You heated the piece you took
White hot and ripe for me
And plunged it deep and hard

Deep into my soul
And what was left of my heart

I writhed in pain
But you couldn’t see
This is life to you
You think this right
But I cared for you
Though I loved you not
And you took that truth
And turned it into my bane

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Whoa! What a unique style you have here!

  • 19 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    That was a good poem, hun! But...really sad. Idk who it's about...but i have an idea. And I'm sorry...so so so sorry...
    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    no..not kelly....

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    OOOooOoO this was about Kelly, wasn't it? I'm sure whatever she said to make you feel this way, I'm sure she didn't mean it!!! Forgetta bout it. lol. I'm so tired, I hvaen't eaten, and I'm supposed to be doing chores. Don't I rock? lol.

    I re read the poem, the darkness was intense. The detail was extraordinary.

    LMAO!! MY BABY BROTHER IS CAUGHT IN THE CURTAINS!! he was spinning around too much and got stuck, lol, sooo cute!! lol.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Aww, hon, you know she didn't mean it. She feels terrible that she even said it, really. It's just... when someone hurts like that, they say things they don't mean. You have to realize that, babe. Disown it, really. If I held on to the all the things like that anyone has ever told me, I wouldn't have a heart at all. She didn't mean it... really.
    Car

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