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  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Please stay.........I love this poem......shivers.........love you
    xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Blood gushes on to the empty road
    Where my body lays dead and grey
    A gash on my artery, still pumping feebly
    I end my life this very day

    that was my favourite bit
    brilliant writing thank u for such great reading

    #~*LuCy*~#

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I love this one, I really do....It says so much!!! Great job...