Wow, very depressing lol. Very well done as always though :).
-A

ooh, this is really good. school can be so inspiring to write a poem simply because you're bored out of your mind, lol. great write! !x x

Holy moley, chica! This rocked louder than Def Lepard mixed with Guns & roses, lol. Beautiful, my dahlin', greeeatt!
Car

haha nice poem. pretty good descrip. i liked it. nice job keep up the good work. and remember you can always talk to me aite. Much Luv

Nick

p.s 5/5 aite

WOW! Really great job! It was so descriptive and scary! I could definetly picture this while I read it. Keep up the great work!
Love Alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXO

hehe i really like this 1 ur very good at writting poems... it jsut flowes on lol great job and keep it up take a look at some of mine if u want to!
5/5

much love
xXSavannahXx

hey i hope everything is going good, you should get on aim. it would be nice to talk to you. your an awsome friends, and a great writer. never forget that. Much Luv

Nick

Thank you all sooo much! Sorry I haven't been commenting much on any of your poems,...I've sort of fallen behind! So frustrated with school and people in general.

Life is horrible for countless reasons. I'm always complaining on my xanga. (check my pf if you want it.)

Thanks for the compliments Nick. You're an awsome friend and writer too! You really are!

Actually, from everyone I read who commented, you're all fantastic writers and I have to get back to work, checking all of the new poems! Sorry...!

Lots of love to EVERYONE! lol.

~Sierra

hey, u there, if you get on aim plz

lol-I don't HAVE aim, lol. I do when I go to my nana's house, but otherwise I don't have it! lol (My stomach hurts....:*(.)

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

im in the room waiting, if you dont wanna come you dont have to, just let me know aite

hehe-thanks guys!!! Amit, you have A LOT of sn don't you? lol-love you lots Sunny! Have a good day! :-D!!

Actually, lets ALL have a good day, lol. I'm sick of monotonous, dull days. SMILE EVERYONE! lol. Sorry. I started off good today.

Woah... so freaky, and woah... just speechless...

omg huni tht was amazing. xxxxxx