Comments : My Biggest Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    It says, I have already voted. So, maybe I forgot to comment on it! Nice and heartfelt write.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful poem, Jeff. So loving and well written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I need someone,as beautiful as you
    Someone to give me a teddy bear
    And whisper in my ear, 'that is your bodyguard'
    Some to define the secret of twelve roses with
    Need new courage to face the mirror
    And smile that someone loves me

    like that part of the poem a lot. I don't know what it was, perhaps the message that it got across. Loved the poem.

    Five/Five. Great job dude

    P.S. thanks for your comment/and or vote on my poem, each one i get is really appreciated and i put a lot of thought into it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Awe, what a beautiful poem to your future girl, in which i hope you find her, she'd be lucky to have you! God bless -5

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    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> Happy Easter!

    All The Love In The World,
    ~*Heather M Craig*~

  • 19 years ago

    by princess_neo

    awww how romantic. realy cute and realy sweet 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Libby M

    I'd have to agree with them all-This is beautiful and very thoughtful-You wont have any trouble finding her thats for sure. Keep your heart open, and stay strong-because it will all be worth it in the end. God Bless.

    Love,

    Libby

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    wonderful poem. keep it up

    thanks for commenting/voting on my poems. means a lot to me.
    luv
    nida

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I loved it....you keep them coming too:)