by Carmen Mar 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
That day I was swimming in my pool, |
by Jamie
This was great im guessing its a story but if its true im sorry bt this was good i loved the last two lines they were wonderful |
by tabithaa
OMG!! is that a true story?? |
by Robert
Now that was exellent the power of it was great the wording was good and the follow up was sublime. You paintied me an image I could not only see but feel that is what a exellent writer can do GREAT JOB!!! |
by Kalika
how terribly sad....my dear, I hope this is not true, and if it is I am terribly sorry....regardless it was a great poem....so much feeling 5/5 I think I'm adding you to my favourites....I'm glad I checked out your stuff..... |
by don mohr
Tragic loss-closure is difficult to convey |