aww your poems can be so sad, i feel depressed now
lol, it's brill

Great poem, even if it is very sad. Im so sorry this happened to you, and if you ever need to talk to someone, feel free to email me. My address is on my profile.

Take care and keep smiling,
Rachelxx

Wow. Lots of trying times you've been through, it seems...

Keep going. That's all I can say.

Very powerful and well written, one minor thing..."You comes over to my bed" I assume that "s" is extra? Just a very insignificant clean-up sort of thing. Very well done.

awww, no it was good dont doubt your work. Anyway- I could see what you were doing through the whole poem. I mean I know you were in a hospital bed... but I could see you talking and stuff, it was really well written.. and i give ita 5
great job hun!

on the contrary i think it is one of your best. it was very very heartfelt and wel written. just a few spelling mistakes you might want to correct though. 5/5
~Freak~

this poem has me in aw. im speechless 5/5

Very nicely done. 5/5 hun.

-xx-

Simply Beautiful~!!!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow...Sabrina...This is deep...It is a great poem...I feel as if I am there with you as you feel this pain...Poems like this are the best...keep it up:)

xoxo Kayla

it might of been long but definitly worth my time..5/5

loved this one

wd

I personallyt like this one the most out of the three I read...5/5

Who is the "you" in the poem? And yest it was a really good one! Loved it hun, as always!

-Mikochan