by ~DyingBlackRose~ Mar 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I once knew this girl |
by Lyla
I'm not saying that all poems have to rhyme but this poem probably would have sounded better if you did make it rhyme. It was still pretty good though! If you have time comment on some of mine 2 please! |
by Kayla
I like this one becuz it shows emotion..keep up the good work |
by Ashlynn
Awsome poem..I like 5/5 |
by Andrea
excellent poem! even though this isnt true, its sad because this does happen so much. |