by Andrea
excellent poem! even though this isnt true, its sad because this does happen so much. |
by Ashlynn
Awsome poem..I like 5/5 |
by Kayla
I like this one becuz it shows emotion..keep up the good work |
by Lyla
I'm not saying that all poems have to rhyme but this poem probably would have sounded better if you did make it rhyme. It was still pretty good though! If you have time comment on some of mine 2 please! |