I really like this poem because it has a strong resolve and intelligence written throughout it, although i aint surprised. i get what you're saying, even if i dont understand exactly how you mean it, if that makes any sense at all. i loved the ending though, because it proves that through this experience you learned something. im glad you can write like this heaha, its not common for people our age to be able to do it this well. good poem over all, nice flow. 4/5 and we aint talkin about burps either.