Do You Still Care?

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 24, 2005


Last night was cold
I couldn’t sleep
For thoughts of you
Would make me weep

Every tear that fell
Was a drop of heat
Sucked from my soul
Leaving me incomplete

I shivered and craved
What we once had
But I know it’s gone
And that makes me sad

My heart is thin
Fragile to the touch
I miss you, now,
I’ve lost so much

Please tell me this
That you still care
And I’ll prove to you
It doesn’t compare

To how I feel
Deep in my heart
Even though
We’re now apart

I still wonder
Each night in sleep
If you’ll share your feelings
Or inside you, keep

Will you trust me, now?
Even through all this
Or leave me alone
To reminisce

I’ll never know
How you feel this day
Unless you answer
My intangible survey

*this is crap... i know...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    NOT CRAP!
    NO, NOT CRAP!
    Sweet and considerate, that's what it is!

  • 19 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    omg...that was so good Zac. Who was it about? God...that was awesome! Good job!
    Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    holy crap.... wow, i havent felt this stupid since... oh, wait, it was only a few days ago.... i have a lot more to say, but im not going to say it because its just anger boiling up inside... everyone just ignore the comment i posted earlier, dont give me crap, i feel stupid enough right now.... it was just be thinking i meant enough to zac for him to feel bad about breaking my heart... oh wow, there i go, see... thats the anger boiling up that i was talking about... no one pay any attention to this....

    I cant believe i was brainless enough to believe that was about me... if anything, that should have been something i wrote... just about how i felt the other day...

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    um...kelly...that wasnt about you...

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    i like that poem, but every time i read it i cant help but think... you say that you want what we once had, and thats frail hopes, impotent dreams, and deceitful love. i mean, i dont mean to be rude or anything... but thats just kind of how i see it.... maybe its just that im not in a good mood... i dunno... im gunna shut up now...

    Kelly

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