by EpithetPoet Mar 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Everything we know today |
by Kevin
Outstanding notion for a poem, good word choice and rarely for this place...not boring or predictable. The flow could do with some tidying up because the syllable count seems a little off in places. |
by topoke
this is a very simple but very well written and touching poem. good stuff. |
Excellent poem. Deep and true. I love it. You have a natural talent. 5/5 |
So bluntly said and so sadly true. this is a beautiful write -5 |
Yet again another wonderfully written poem. |