This is very well written. So often we wish to help others when inturn we only need to help ourselves - look back in on the reflection. I loved this. <3

^^Kalah.

Hey moe,

I found your original poem at my house, I think you left it there when we went by my house for lunch. It's a little different but personally I like your first one better. I'll try to get it back to you but I'm in Washington right now. Love! Keep up the poem writing!!!

so sad....i can relate to this, a lot.....hope you're doing ok, keep your head up.......if you ever need to talk my AIM sn is FakingThisLove and my yahoo one is xxlostxmyxangelxx keep up the awesome writing ~much love~

-brittnay-

Thanks guys, alot! You all are so awesome!
Love always Katie

Very nice poem, Katie. Reminds me of Toni's poem too. But that's a good thing. Very well done. The last verse was particularly good.

Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

WHOA!! Excellent write!! I didn't see that coming!! Very nice job......5/5

WOW!!!!!! I love this! It flows really good, and the end is AMAZING! Keep it up, 5/5!

excellent poem, i love it!! thank you for your comment =)

that was beautiful thanks for the comment

Unloved ♥

I'm speachless..this poem is so great. I've been cutting for a while and sometimes I'll look in the mirror and don't even recognize the person I have become. One of my friends also cuts and when I try to help her, I realize I should say some of the stuff to myself I say to her.

omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

Nice twist at the end, love it. 5/5

same as the others...awsome
luv yas
sammy

This poem is so amazing. I love the ending, brillaint idea. It's also kind os sad as well, I know the feeling the person in this poem has. It really is just a brillaint piece of work
5/5

this.....great.....excellent....speechless....

beauifuly written - keep up the gd work ###

Great final line- wasn't expecting it. great work x