Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

brilliant poem, superb style and choice of words, excellent

Hey Robyn. Nice poem, it was really well written. Keep it up!

Very nicely done!!! Great Job!!!

I love your poem. how did things end up with you guys??

To sarahbeast we are still together and sticking it out through the hard times, its a very complicated situation that is too long to explain, but maybe it will be in another poem someday

Dis poem is truly beautiful it's ritely worden and meaning ful . Your talented ur work amazes me. Your words one can get lost in. The picture you paint for the minds eye is wonderful. Taking the reader to another place. dammm dis poem is all dat. so realistic u luv ur guyz dont ya